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Listening to my memories collapse on the floor.
it's music to my withering soul.
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Never had a feeling without doubt,
but my heart is cold, All ideas ran out.

  I've got a lot of actions still inside,
Gotta fool all the hatred,
   ....and swallow all my pride.
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There has never been a place more like home.
I used to call it mine, and believe I'd never roam.

but...lately I've been worrying....

  If I was lost during those times.

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Out of this world, I've been running all my thoughts.


Simple like pain, but it's always been hard to gain

I've been trying to get out of what I think I love the most.
this I call, from me to you, am I the parasite, or host?

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Listen to the walls, are they calling out my name?
Do I have the strength? should I even care?
if I had more time? would I do it all the same?
Who out there is with me, are we tired of the game?

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it's never enough to be "just fine"
I've had trouble just to share.

truth of how we came to be, is written in the air.

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but for now,

I'll go to sleep,

I'll take a bow,

I' won't say a peep.

I'll close my eyes,

Say all my prayers,

save my  why's.

and let the dreams begin.
Hard to explain, just humming and writing.

it's horrible I know, just ah, tired, and wanted to write something.


I'll take it as a no no.
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:icongypsyblaze:
GypsyBlaze Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
amazing and heartfelt...truly one of your absolute best
:clap::hug::glomp::clap:
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:icongumblewumblebug:
gumblewumblebug Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2009
I don't know how you can say that. haha. I appreciate it ten times though. :) thank you!
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:icongypsyblaze:
GypsyBlaze Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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:iconaberration-net:
aberration-net Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Damn browser won't let me favorite it.

The first line made me think of NIN, the rest I could tell was very personal.
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:icongumblewumblebug:
gumblewumblebug Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009
I wasn't sure what I was thinking when I did that. I suppose it was a bit, because when I write late at night, it's usually something I don't think about, then read later and go.. what the hell?

I'll have to read it again I suppose.

Thanks, I'll have a mental favourite from you. =P
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:iconaberration-net:
aberration-net Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahah. The best kind.
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:icongumblewumblebug:
gumblewumblebug Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009
NO hugs are!! :)
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:iconaberration-net:
aberration-net Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Well in that case: :hug:
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:icongumblewumblebug:
gumblewumblebug Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009
Haha!!! yes!

I mean, ahem, thank you sir. and a one right back to you.

:hug:
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:iconaberration-net:
aberration-net Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
lol. This is going to lead into another hug war.

:hug:
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