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Listening to my memories collapse on the floor.
it's music to my withering soul.
Never had a feeling without doubt,
but my heart is cold, All ideas ran out.

  I've got a lot of actions still inside,
Gotta fool all the hatred,
   ....and swallow all my pride.

There has never been a place more like home.
I used to call it mine, and believe I'd never roam.

but...lately I've been worrying....

  If I was lost during those times.


Out of this world, I've been running all my thoughts.

Simple like pain, but it's always been hard to gain

I've been trying to get out of what I think I love the most.
this I call, from me to you, am I the parasite, or host?


Listen to the walls, are they calling out my name?
Do I have the strength? should I even care?
if I had more time? would I do it all the same?
Who out there is with me, are we tired of the game?


it's never enough to be "just fine"
I've had trouble just to share.

truth of how we came to be, is written in the air.


but for now,

I'll go to sleep,

I'll take a bow,

I' won't say a peep.

I'll close my eyes,

Say all my prayers,

save my  why's.

and let the dreams begin.
Hard to explain, just humming and writing.

it's horrible I know, just ah, tired, and wanted to write something.

I'll take it as a no no.
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GypsyBlaze Sep 10, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
amazing and heartfelt...truly one of your absolute best
I don't know how you can say that. haha. I appreciate it ten times though. :) thank you!
GypsyBlaze Sep 12, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
a-tim Aug 31, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Damn browser won't let me favorite it.

The first line made me think of NIN, the rest I could tell was very personal.
I wasn't sure what I was thinking when I did that. I suppose it was a bit, because when I write late at night, it's usually something I don't think about, then read later and go.. what the hell?

I'll have to read it again I suppose.

Thanks, I'll have a mental favourite from you. =P
a-tim Sep 1, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahah. The best kind.
a-tim Sep 1, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Well in that case: :hug:
Haha!!! yes!

I mean, ahem, thank you sir. and a one right back to you.

a-tim Sep 1, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
lol. This is going to lead into another hug war.

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